Sleeping Valor

1) It's already been said, but it's always good to set aside your work and come back to it later. Then it will be less familiar to you and you'll ...

>.< I think my problem having too much inspiration. I keep starting a story, then being (randomly, without trying to) hit by a new idea that sounds better, then hit ...

I completely agree. >.< My eyes go crossed when I try and read a story that's all stuck together. There may as well be no paragraphs at all. =P

This was great. =P It's amazing, but if I think about it, I can remember at least one feeling disappointment as I read through someone critiquing my grammar, which shouldn't ...

Lol! Brilliant work. Definitely long overdue. ^_^

Kadie is right about the emotions, you definitely have to be careful. Some questions you should ask yourself are: How do her parents feel about this? Is her lively behavior ...

(LOL! I was just working out my plot with her little mini-lesson on plotting. ^_^) Ok, at a first glance, this is depressing. I mean...she's going to die . Questions ...

Reading books written by other people will only help you get a feel for the genre and maybe inspire you, but it might not be as helpful for helping you ...

If you're trying to come up with a plot, I'd do a word bank. Think up a list of words that relate to the story, images or concepts you want ...

Don't do it!!! I have so many started but unfinished stories it isn't funny. I find an idea I love, then suddenly one that I like more comes along...and then ...